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Nakashima · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 5:54 am Post subject: sick and twisted short stories..

WARNING VERY SICK AND TWISTED.. DO NOT READ IF YOU CAN'T HANDLE MESSED UP THINKING.. THIS IS PART OF A BOOK THAT I AM WRITING.. TELL ME IF IT'S ANY GOOD.. WOULD YA..DEATHSHADOW THIS IS ABOUT A BABY AND IT'S MESSED UP I DON'T WANT YOU TO GET UPSET OR ANYTHING..LOL..

Landen was holding baby jasmine when he saw the maggot in her left nostril. It was a creamy yellow, Startled, he almost dropped the baby.
Then he realized that what looked like a maggot was just dried up snot. Perhaps he could trap its leading edge with his fingernail and pull it out...
As if sensing his thoughts, the maggot - and, with horror, he realized that, yes, it was a maggot - retreated into the depths of the nostril. He felt sick. Suddenly the tiles of the floor were very distant, and their patterns were starting to slide sideways.
Then the baby's head cracked open to reveal a load of maggots within, and the stench was awful, then his hands slid open.
That was the moment at which his wife returned, just in time to see the baby's skull hit the tiles of the floor with a sickening crack.
And now the voice was asking Landen the question, again. He thought he'd already answered it, but apparently not.
"How do you plead?"
"Not guilty."
The End

YES THE GUY IS INSANE....!!!LOL..

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Peros · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 6:25 pm Post subject:

wow....I knew that baby was trouble the moment he started to have a craving for carpets, wallpaper, pet food, bird seeds, pets, couches, furniture, pet hair, people hair, live animals, clothing and compost piles. :roll:

But it still sounds like a.....intresting...story :wink:
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NetNiwk · Joined: 13 Apr 2005 Posts: 74 Location: belgium

how does that magot got there :shock: :shock:

Nyxa Nightwing · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 7:15 pm Post subject:

OK as sick and twisted as the story is.....I wanna read more!!!!!!! :shock: what a way to start off a story......
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Nakashima · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 8:10 pm Post subject:

netniwk i can't ruin the story for you... that was just the intro to it.. maybe soon i will post more as i go.. :wink: and yes it is sick and twisted.. but i think it will be a interesting book.. look i already have people wanting more..lol
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drakyra shadowfang · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 8:48 pm Post subject:

that was a good story sick and twisted but good
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Mashekle · Shadow Council Joined: 13 Apr 2005 Posts: 3541

WOW! thats awesome. I would read it for sure ;)
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Peros · Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 2:30 am Post subject:

Yes...it better be sick...twisted...short....and full of maggots that story better be :wink:

I am curious as to what happens next, the begging starts off of something that reminds me of a dream squence of a cartoon or something and it really appeals to me.
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Nakashima · Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 7:32 pm Post subject:

:?: :?: ok so i think i have waited long enough to post the next part to the story... :?: :?:

maybe not..lol :P

na i am going to write another short story..lol ha ha.. here it is..

When I was younger, I used to live in a strange house. I wouldn't say it was really haunted... just strange. I remember, when I was about 7 or 8 (I'm 21 now) I was coloring in my coloring book in my room, when I hear someone messing with the door, so when it opens, I expected it to be my sister. The door opened slowly, and I didn't even bother to look who it was, so I just said, "Come in kelly." But no one answers. So I look up, and see no one. I looked in the hallway, and no one was there. Since I was young, I didn't think much about it.

Another time, I was in the hallway, talking to my mom who was in the bathroom right next to me. I suddenly see my sister jumping with jump rope. Now that I think of it... she didn't really know how to jump rope. So I whisper the words "kelly" and she vanishes. I finaly decided to tell my mother about this....whatever it was.. i tried talking to kelly about it just the other day and she wouldnt talk about it. So i told my mother and she looked at me confused.. and said who is kelly?,i said ha ha very funny.. my sister kelly dugh!! my mother then said this and my whole life changed " hun you dont have a sister".

FUN STUFF.. SPOOKY.. A 21 YEAR OLD WHO THOUGHT A GHOST WAS HER SISTER... :shock:
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Mashekle · Shadow Council Joined: 13 Apr 2005 Posts: 3541

Ok thats f#$ked up.....

:P
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Nakashima · Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 3:01 am Post subject:

ok at work this weekend imma think of another story to post but it might now be sick and twisted but we will see..
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cian bloodbane · Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 2:36 pm Post subject:

I like it more when you write erotic storys : ;)
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